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About Me Member Emotional Poet cruely-impaired16/Female/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 6 Years
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EmotionSo close,  
I can see it in your eyes,  Feel it in every touch,  This, you cannot disguise,  Lingering behind every movement,  Hiding in the shadowy corners,  Entwind in the lacing of our fingers,  Waiting for the precise moment,  Your body trembles,  You anticipate fear in your mind,  Until boldness prevails,  To find your lips to mine. Emotion
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The LightIts not all that great  Life ain’t all that fun  People around here are full of hate  
And life with him is now done  Through all the fogginess of it all  There is a small light that shines  A new smile I do recall  From days left behind  I turned away a few a times before  This time I can’t be stubborn  I won’t turn away anymore  Or I will have myself to scorn  As the days go on  
The light becomes more clear  This time he could be gone  If I let him disappear  He may not wait  He could go on without me  If I am too late  His face I may never see & The Light
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YoursLife was once beautiful  Only to be destroyed  All is wonderful  Until completely deployed  His greatness once adored  Simply fell to none  His feeling for me hit the floor  And *Us* became entirely shunned  To this day I can't help but remember  The horrendous day he called  My life I would have surendered  If his decision I could have stalled  But it is all gone now  Nothing could be said  
Still I wonder how  These words could be rightly read Yours
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SomethingSomething isnt here anymore  Its fallen from my life  Deep from inside the core  The middle of all this strife  I cannot focus my eyes again  To much has been exposed  They are filled to the very brim  And cannot even be closed  I've been poured on the floor  Like water from a broken glass  Turned inside out and blood i bore  Knowing nothing like this would last  Now I wait for a new feeling  A new someone for which to cling  Until I find it I'll be dealing  Grieving for that something Something
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Fri Feb 4, 2005, 5:33 PM
All by myself, Dont wanna Be, All by myself lol that song is tight!! lol Go Celine!
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  • Current Residence: Fayetteville, WV
  • Interests: Art, Poetry, Nursing
  • Favourite movie: A Walk To Remember
  • Favourite band or musician: Lexi Pierson
  • Favourite artist: Catharine Akers
  • Favourite poet or writer: Some guy and I dont kno his name lol
  • Skin of choice: I prefer... My own! *×*
  • Favourite game: Softball
  • Favourite gaming platform: Softball Field
  • Favourite cartoon character: Speedy Gonzalez
  • Personal Quote: Bye Love Ya!

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~ArmorFelix2001 Dec 27, 2003, 9:38:25 AM
I admit revising isn't for everybody, I don't like it myself, but it is the key to distiguishing oneself, I write down a lot and look at it again and say, "How do I really convey my message of what I felt?"

I just do it as a hobby, playing with words is fun:D
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~J-D Nov 1, 2003, 7:03:28 PM
You have a great collection of poems here. I particulary like Love-Undescribable, it definately rings true. Cant wait to see some more poems !!

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Student 3D modeller/animator
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~lovelymystery May 30, 2003, 1:19:54 PM
just wanted to say hi. i saw one of your poems & will definitely be back to check out your other work. take care.
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~cruely-impaired Oct 27, 2003, 12:56:41 PM
Well I thank you for looking in on my work... I wasn't sure how people might look at it lol
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